Monday, April 11, 2016

Journal #11: Reader-Response Theory

REMINDERS ABOUT JOURNAL EXPECTATIONS:

Each of these journal entries should be at least two paragraphs (each paragraph should be at least eight sentences in length).

Remember, this is a graded piece of formal, academic writing. Every post you make should be of high quality and represent everything you know about communicating clearly and effectively.

Think about content.
  • Engage with the material in a substantive way: attempt to dig deep and answer questions thoroughly. Avoid stating the obvious. Write at least eight sentences per paragraph.
  • Use textual evidence whenever possible: refer to the text to make points that extend beyond it. Apply what you are reading to the real world.
  • Make connections: draw course material into connections with issues of the day by attempting to integrate references to blogs, websites, online articles, etc. If you need more information about a particular critical lens, seek it out by doing some research online.
  • Answer the question being asked: keep your responses focused around a central point or argument without straying from what is assigned.
  • Keep your response formal: avoid using made-up words like gonna or kinda and never use texting shortcuts like u for youlol, etc.
  • Move the conversation forward: avoid responses to others where you simply say “I agree.” What else can you add to the thread? What new insight do you have about the original writer’s response? What questions do you have? Does your post bring the conversation to a screeching halt or does it extend it?
Think about conventions.
  • Try to fix your spelling mistakes: use Google Drive for drafting your posts.
  • Use capitals in the right places: people’s names, places, the beginning of a sentence, and on “I.” Using all capitals is like yelling.
  • Punctuate properly: period at the end of a sentence, space after a period, comma, or end bracket. One “!” will do; you don’t need a string of exclamation marks.
As you continue with your chosen classic novel, you will be asked to apply (to the best of your abilities) two critical lenses each week to your reading. In your responses, you should avoid simply summarizing what you read; this is not a book report. Instead, focus on analyzing the plot, characters, setting, etc. through the assigned lens.

READER-RESPONSE CRITICISM


Many of you stated that reader-response criticism seemed the easiest to understand. Therefore, one journal this week will focus on reader-response criticism as it applies to your novel.


Consider the following explanation of the reader-response critical lens taken from Literature: Reading and Writing with Critical Strategies by Steven Lynn:


"Reader-response criticism starts from the idea that the critic's interest ultimately ought to be focused on the reader rather than on the text itself or the author. Without readers, it seems safe to say, there would be little reason to talk about literature; it is the reader who brings the text to life, who gives it meaning. Otherwise, it's just black marks on a white page.


How does one do reader-response criticism? If the goal is to offer a personal, subjective response, one simply reads the text and responds. As you can imagine, such a strategy has been especially popular because it really liberates the reader. It's difficult to see how any response could be wrong: who could say, No, that isn't your response? Some responses may seem richer than others; some responses may seem to deal more fully with the text; some responses may seem more authentic and honest than others. But any particular response may well help another reader to a more interesting or satisfying experience of the work."


With that in mind, in your response this week explain your response to what you have read so far of your assigned book. Here are some possible ideas to consider, but you are not limited to the topics listed:

  • Note interesting words, images, phrases, or details. Ask questions and speculate about why the author might have chosen them. Describe how they make you feel.
  • Write about literary aspects of the novel such as setting, characterization, dialogue, plot, point of view, theme, and symbolism. What do you notice about these elements of the novel?
  • Make connections between the text and your own experiences. What does the reading make you think of? Does it remind you of anyone or any event in your own life?
  • Make connections between the text and other texts or events. Does the novel bring to mind any other related issues from the past or present?
  • Ask yourself questions about the text. What don’t you understand about the novel or a particular passage within the novel?

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  1. Pursuing the novel, Gone With the Wind by Margaret Mitchell, as a reader- response criticism I think that Scarlett has a way of being herself and making her own decisions even though it's against what everyone expects out of her. I think I can connect to this to our lives and reality because many people make their choices based of what everyone else expects them to do. There are so many things people expect out of others and if they don't meet expectations they will just judge you. But in this novel Scarlett proves that it doesn't really matter what everyone else thinks accept herself. She wants to please herself and have fun with her life. She wants to dance and flirt and wear pretty dresses but since she is a widow she is expected to stay at home and not go to any balls or celebrations, and just wear black. She decided to go out of her comfort zone and shut out what everyone expected of her.
    Another thing I noticed when I portrayed this novel as a reader-response criticism was a connection I made between the text Gone With the Wind and the text, The Odyssey, because some things have seemed to be similar such as they are expected to let all visitors in your home. Melly, Scarlett's sister in law, said “...I won't be rude to him either”(238). In this quote Scarlett and Melly are talking about a man named Captain Butler also known as Rhett, that no one in their current town, Atlanta, likes but the two girls refuse to be rude and not allow him in the house even though those are Miss Pittypat's expectations. As soon as I read this I thought of the current book we are reading in English because everyone is expected to allow guests into their homes no matter who it is. Another thing I noticed in common between theses two text is that neither are in this time period. They are both formal and both have many high expectations set. Thinking of these two text to be so similar, I am wondering if it's just because I Am reading them at the same time. I wonder if I would still have theses comparisons in my head while reading, if I read them in separate periods of time.

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  2. With proceeding to read, Kidnapped by Robert Louis Stevenson, I have noticed that the main character, David Balfour, really has no morals as to what he is trying to accomplish. At first he was sent on a quest to visit his uncle and deliver a letter but after he was set foot on the ship to an unknown destination, I don’t quite understand what the goal at the end of the journey is. Is he trying to return home because he was kidnapped by the ship? From here I am trying to make a connection with the title because so far, it doesn’t say he was deliberately kidnapped. David isn’t even acting as if he was kidnapped which makes it even more difficult to make the connection. He doesn’t have an urge to return home or to even return to his bipolar uncle. Altogether, I am waiting for the meaning of the story to reveal itself and for the to make valid sense.

    Also as I have continued to read, I have noticed more and more characterization of David and Alan. These two characters are the complete opposite of each other yet they are each other's companion and end up working very well together. David is thoughtful, resourceful, and a man of his faith. He isn’t necessarily looking for trouble yet he will fight if he is called to action, like in the roundhouse for an example. He also tends to bring up his faith when making decisions which is something that Alan does not do. Alan is a big rebel looking for trouble everywhere. He is the reason David turned on the captains and is now following in his dangerous travels. Both characters are still developing as the journey continues farther and farther away from home.

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    1. I strongly agree that David has no morals, but what do you think the purpose the author is trying to get at there?

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    3. Now knowing more information about the story, I think that the author might be trying to say don't give up even when the problem isn't your fault since he was kidnapped and he has to go through this forever lasting journey without knowing if he'll make it home or not.

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  3. In this week's reading of "Journey to the Center of the Earth," not a lot of excitement took place. Harry, Hardwigg, and Hans made it to the volcano and went upon the exploration underground. I think the most exhilarating that that happened was when the group almost died of dehydration. There was a specially monotonous part when they first got inside the crater because there were several days of them doing absolutely nothing. Why you ask, because they were waiting for sunlight that would showcase the hole in which they were supposed to descend. If it had stayed cloudy for a few more days, the time would have passed and the book would have had no reason for being written. Harry continued to seem like a wimp and still in awe of Hans manliness. For it was Hans who saved them from dying when he found water and proceeded to beat the wall with a crowbar. Hans also got burned from the boiling water, yet he only drank a modest amount, unlike his companions. I wouldn't be surprised if they threw up because of how much water they drank.

    I do not have have personal connections to this story so far. The plot is bland and there are a lot of geological facts that I'm not even sure are true. There is a lot of information about the environment they are in, which is nice because it gives some insight. Hardwigg is a very smart professor, but he is arrogant and won't accept anything that he didn't come up with. For example, when Harry questioned the temperature or noted that they were walking uphill, Hardwigg almost immediately started arguing with him. Harry himself says that he decided to just agree with his uncle because he didn't want to anger or upset him. Harry seems like a spoiled brat. He is continuously complaining, even though he agreed to go on this journey. I also do not like the fact that Harry was willing to just leave his uncle alone in the middle of an underground labyrinth, with no water. So far, Hans is my favorite character because he has caused no drama. I think Harry might have a crush on Hans because he's always talking about how indifferent and calm he is. I hope that this becomes canon and I ship it.

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    1. I agree with you that this book is extremely bland. How did you imaging this book to be like before you started reading it? Were you hoping for it to be more action packed? I personally was hoping for that and a bit more adventurous. I know that they already traveled to a different country and into a volcano but they did it all in luxury. Maybe what I mean to say is that there should be some more hardships. Do you agree?

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    2. I imagined the characters to be less stuck up and a bit more humble. Most characters in books are relatable and likable, but the best character so far is Hans. I thought that the book would focus more on the adventure aspect. Instead there is a lot of unnecessary text about boring parts. Examples of the drawn out dullness is when the author uses two paragraphs taking about what they ate and another three paragraphs explaining how detailed the caverns are. I do agree with you, the only hardship they have faced is them running out of water. I feel the book would be a lot more interesting if there were more trials or challenges. Realistically, they would have had a harder time by this point in the journey.

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  4. The further I get into "The Light in the Forest" the more annoyed I get at the point of view. The book is written in third person omniscient point of view but it often switches between True Son's perspective and a guard's perspective. I can understand the literary advantage of this. The switched perspectives allows the reader to view the events from two completely different minds. Despite this, I find the switch bothersome. It seems the author switches the perspective when I want to know what the other character is thinking and while he attempts to give hints to what the character thinks I wish he would expand on it.

    The book reminds me of a recent event. A six year old girl was forced from her home, while her screaming foster siblings and crying foster mother watched on. This was all because her biological father was a member of a Native American tribe, making her Native American. The Child Welfare Act made it so the must be placed in a Native American home. This story has many parallels to "The Light in the Forest". For example True Son is ripped from his home to be with people of his own race despite all of his protests.

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    1. Do you agree that True Son shouldn't have been taken from his Indian family? I agree that the switching of point of view is annoying but at the same time it shows the different use of lens in the story that we're learning about it class.

      There are two sides to every story and while I don't think taking True Son from his Indian family was right, you get to see a white man's perspective.

      When I read this story I am so often reminded of when people say I'm so grey. I'm not black or white, I am aware of both sides of the coin. This story is based on real life experiences when two people argue. You can't just raise your voices in an argument and keep preaching your right, you have to listen to what others have to say.

      In every story and real life there's a good guy and a bad guy. What I've learned in every fairy tale and throughout history is that people aren't evil to be evil, they thinking they're right. Whether the Whites are wrong or not is something that has gone down in history, but I think that this story will favor True Son and his real, Indian family who raised him.

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  5. As I continue to read "Lord Of The Flies" I am beginning to get to know more about the setting. When all the boys first met they had no idea if it was an island or not. All we got to know was that they were in the jungle and then going to head for the lagoon. As Jack, Ralph, and Simon go exploring they realize that they can't see around the corner. Then you slowly realize as they do that it is an island. I think that the setting is so important because that is one way they were hoping to get back home, by it not being an island and find people. However, once they realize it's an island they have to come up with a new idea. Now that they have explored the island they know what types of things it has on it to help them survive.

    This book reminds me of Hatchet. Not only because of the setting, but also with the plot. Plane crash, trying to survive and find a way back home. One of the main things that is different is that in "Lord Of The Flies" there are more characters, and they are going to help each other, and also break each other apart. When dealing with decisions and what the best way to get out would be. I think that in "Lord Of The Flies" the boys will get out safely, or at least most of them will because they have other people to work with, were in Hatchet he was all alone. Another thing that was similar is they both have males for their leading characters. I think the authors made them male character because males are more thought of as the ones who will go hunting and camping, rather than women.

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    1. Gabie, the setting is definitely super important. It creates a problem with how they will get back home but also with there supposedly being a beast from the water. If there really is a beast, this will make it much harder for them to escape it because they will be surrounded by the beast. I've never read hatchet but the way you describe it,it sounds interesting. Although there are more people in "Lord of the Flies" they get into many arguments and they don't agree about the ways of survival. Their unwillingness to work together could very well be the reason if they don't make it off the island.

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    2. Yes, I think that since they don't get along well many of them won't make it out alive. I believe that the boys will rebel against each other causing many problems.I agree with you that the setting can be important, however I do believe that in some books it is not as important as it is in this book.

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  6. In Little Women, by Louisa May Alcott, in one of the first chapters of the book the family receives a letter from their father who is away at war. Alcott does a really good job of making it easy to visualize the girls sitting around their mother reading the sentimental letter. She makes your emotions reflect the character's emotions. In this case, it is a longing for a family member. It seems very bittersweet, because they are happy to have heard from their father but they also obviously miss him. A symbol in the novel is Jo's dress with a burn mark on it that she wore to a fancy party. It's a symbol for Jo's disinterest in being seen as a "proper young lady". She doesn't care what other people think and she is okay with being who she is.

    Jo's personality reminds me of Scout from To Kill A Mockingbird, but a few years older. They both don't care what other people think besides their families. They are both tough and don't want to fit into the typical female gender stereotype. I also believe that Meg is kind of like Jem in To Kill a Mockingbird. They are both the older sibling who understands how the world works. They are more cynical than their younger sibling. I'm wondering if Laurie and Jo will get together in the end or if Jo will refuse to have a husband like she says she will.

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  7. So far in "The Adventures of Tom Sawyer" it has been all about Tom getting in trouble. Mark Twain describes everything Tom does very well. It is easy to visualize when he fight people because he does that often. The story can be confusing at times as well because it jumps around. The dialogue sometimes gets jumbled and I can't understand who is talking. Twain also described characters looks very well and makes it all very visual. One other problem is that the setting is not described very well at all so I can't picture the setting very well.

    I can't say I see a connection between this story and anything else. It is a more unique story than I expected. The only connection I can make is Tom is kind of the same as I was as a kid. He spends all day tricking kids and getting in trouble. I got in trouble a lot as a kid as well. So far Twain keeps bringing up the fact the Tom's Aunt doesn't discipline very much. I feel as if this plays a very big part in the plot but I haven't quite figured it out yet. He brings this up through Tom when he is talking to his sibling about how his aunt is all talk but never actually does anything. Tom usually just runs away when he gets in trouble and comes back to no trouble.

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    1. I agree with you on the fact that Mark twain's writing style is very easy to picture. I also think that Tom's lack of a father figure efects how aunt Polly disciplines him.

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  8. I have only gotten to chapter 3 in "Pride and Prejudice" and what I'm starting to see the differences and characteristics of characters and how they interact with each other. The chapter have mostly revolved around setting, the Netherfield park. Because I have noticed characterization, so far the book has revolved around a family, the Bennets. Because the Bennets have five girls, their household is constantly busy and they each are different in their own way. I have even began to see what kind of people Mr. and Mrs. Bennet are. Mrs. Bennet is a foolish, somewhat arrogant, all about gossip and attention type of person. Because I noticed certain types of characteristics, I've noticed somewhat humor so far. It's hard to understand it though sometimes because it's somewhat mature jokes.
    Another thing I see so far is irony. Irony is something I saw even just the first two chapters. For example the first line represents irony. It says, ""Everyone knows that a single rich man is looking for a wife." There's irony because you would think, "Everyone knows that a single rich man will be pursued by women who want to be his wife." Also, each character is somewhat representing irony. The author places each characters in situations where something seems something but turns out to be something else.

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  9. I have only gotten to chapter 3 in "Pride and Prejudice" and what I'm starting to see the differences and characteristics of characters and how they interact with each other. The chapter have mostly revolved around setting, the Netherfield park. Because I have noticed characterization, so far the book has revolved around a family, the Bennets. Because the Bennets have five girls, their household is constantly busy and they each are different in their own way. I have even began to see what kind of people Mr. and Mrs. Bennet are. Mrs. Bennet is a foolish, somewhat arrogant, all about gossip and attention type of person. Because I noticed certain types of characteristics, I've noticed somewhat humor so far. It's hard to understand it though sometimes because it's somewhat mature jokes.
    Another thing I see so far is irony. Irony is something I saw even just the first two chapters. For example the first line represents irony. It says, ""Everyone knows that a single rich man is looking for a wife." There's irony because you would think, "Everyone knows that a single rich man will be pursued by women who want to be his wife." Also, each character is somewhat representing irony. The author places each characters in situations where something seems something but turns out to be something else.

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    1. Why do you find Mrs. Bennet to so be foolish? Do you see Mr. Bennet as being almost the same way? It's surprised me while reading that the girls seemed to be almost the same kind of people as their parents. I mean, it's pretty silly to go after a man that they barely even know just because their parents suggested it. All they cared about, at least at first, was his money. It's a peculiar situation.

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    2. Why do you find Mrs. Bennet to so be foolish? Do you see Mr. Bennet as being almost the same way? It's surprised me while reading that the girls seemed to be almost the same kind of people as their parents. I mean, it's pretty silly to go after a man that they barely even know just because their parents suggested it. All they cared about, at least at first, was his money. It's a peculiar situation.

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  10. Im only to chapter 4 right now in the, Light in August.” Already I can tell the differences between characters and start to see the plot of the story and what's going on. I also can tell what's going on and what people think and what people think is morally right and wrong. I can see that Lena is a scared little girl and doesn’t have much in her life right now. She can’t trust anyone and is scared too I think because of her baby daddy leaving her out to dry. She seems like a strong girl but she needs some help and guides to get through life right now.
    Armstid is a very nice guy and he helped out Lena in the beginning but now he left her because his wife made him kick her out. I feel like that's kinda absurd because Lena had nothing and she has no place to go. Now hses walking around town and has very little money. She needs help and I think that Armstid should have helped her out more and defend her against his wife. I feel like Lena will find someone soon and will become happy and be in an safe environment now that she is in this town.

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    1. As the book continues, it switches the story, and the first couple chapters become background story. So far, what do you think of Lena? There seems to be confusion with the last name of her babies father. Do you think Joe purposely told her a different last name so he wouldn't be found. Do you like the style of writing performed in this book?

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    2. The writing in the book is different and strange so far. Lena is a sweet girl who love's her baby and just want's to find her baby daddy. I feel like Joe doesn't want to be found because he's scared of the truth and scared to face Lena. I feel that Joe should tell her the truth and respect her and help her out.

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  11. As I am reading The Red Badge of Courage, I am relating quite a bit. My mother is much like Henry's mother, they both do not like the idea of their sons going into the Army. Also I feel like Stephen Crane made Henry like some people of today's world - scared. Henry is the type of guy to run when he sees trouble and this bothers me because he will get nowhere in life. I don't like to see people run from their problems. I wasn't sure why Henry was surprised that nature kept going instead of stopping when it had been flooded with blood. I am not much of a fan of Henry. He needs to man up in this book or I won't like it as much as I could.
    In chapter 5, Crane states that "He become not a man but a member." Henry became a member of the Army when he signed up, he became part of something that is going on during a crisis. He should not be fleeing battles. I want to know if Henry is scared of dying with all of his running that he is doing. Crane did a good job with the development of this book. I feel like he really "hit the hammer on the head" with what Henry would feel like going through such a horrible war. His characters are what I think they were like during the Civil War. Crane is doing a good job with putting this book image into my head.

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    1. With how you said your mother doesn't agree with her sons joining the army, would you listen to her more then Henry did with his mother?

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    2. I probably would listen to my mother more because that's just how I'm raised. Although I would join the Army if there was a really bad incident, like terrorism. Then I would feel like I would need to join.

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  12. In the novel Catch-22, author Joseph Heller starts the book off with Yossarian in the hospital. Yossarian isn't really injured, he just doesn't want to fight. I found this an interesting way to begin the book, but as I thought about it I decided that it was to help establish the war setting and mood of the war. The setting is a war base, with a hospital down the road. Yossarian frequently visits the hospital, and this shows that he does not want to be in combat anymore, he just wants to be home. This sets the mood of the war, the men are going insane with how many missions they have to complete, and are going as far as fake injuries to get into the hospital.

    Another thing I have found interesting in the book is how all the characters have something off about them. All of the characters are just a little crazy. I believe this is to show the effect war had on everyone. This makes me feel guilty almost. No one can truly understand what the soldiers that fight or fought in war really experience. Nobody but them suffers so much for so little in return. This book gives readers a look into the life of a war base, and it isn't a look people want to see. All of the little stories in the book are examples of possibilities that soldiers experienced in the war.

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    1. I agree that he showing a side of war that people don't necessarily want to see. Do you think that people have advocated against war because of this one novel?

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    2. No I believe it has just given people a further understanding of the effect war had on everyone enlisted.

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  13. In the novel Animal Farm written by George Orwell there is a lot of things I do not understand. When the animals overran the Manor Farm, they came up with Seven Commandments to sort of act like law for their farm. A few of the commandments put together can be viewed as the animals don't want to become like the humans. But Snowball one of the major leaders of the animals keeps coming up with ideas to better the farm for the animals. One idea that Snowball came up with is that they want to build a windmill, that produces more power together. The commandments tell the animals to try to avoid being humans but by building a windmill they would further their technology therefore making them more like humans. I think this infers that the animals will become like humans sooner or later. Another problem that has risen on the farm is that the main two leaders, Napoleon and Snowball, are always butting heads and they never agree on anything. I think this infers that the animals will have to chose sides.

    The book makes me feel warm inside. It makes me happy that the animals are running a farm better than humans did. I am happy for the animals who overran the Manor Farm because of the way that they were treated. They deserve this, I just hope they can keep the flame going. But by the way they're going with Snowball and Napoleon always fighting, and people not doing the work that they should be doing, I don't think that will happen.

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    1. I think you made a good point when you said that the animals will become like humans. I hadn't looked at it that way before. When I read about the windmill and the arguments I pictured two government leaders arguing about something. I picture the animal farm as a government that is going through several revolutions at a time, and Snowball and Napoleon are just two different types of government. Did you picture it this way also? Why do you think the book is based around politics?

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    2. I didn't see it as that way, but now that you say that I can view it from that point of view. I believe that it is based around politics to show how hard it actually is to run a farm or run a country, and to show all the complications. What do you think about this?

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  14. In Catch-22 I have noticed that the main character, Yossarian, seems to have gone insane because of the war. Nobody seems to notice it because they're all insane. This makes me wonder where all of the sane people are at. Nobody in this division in the Air Force seems to be all the way there mentally. I find this interesting because I feel there should at least be some normal people, but they all have weird things about them. I think the author is trying to show the negatives of war by making all of the characters insane. The book seems very anti-war which doesn't make sense because we need war to prevent other countries from taking over. I'm confused by how the characters treat each other because they are very mean to each other. I have no idea how they function together on missions because Heller never writes about the missions.

    All of the insanity is countered by humor which makes the book quite a bit better. One of the characters names is Major Major Major Major which I find pretty ridiculous and funny. Also in a lot of chapters there are conversations where they repeat the same thing over again which can be humorous at times. It can also be annoying while reading the book. Sometimes it will just continue dumb conversations without developing the story at all. I just want the plot to develop more without the stupid dialogue at times. This reminds of my conversations with my friends because they're super pointless. I hope as I read on the book develops the plot more.

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    1. I agree that this book is trying to show the insanity of war and the effect it had on everyone in it. I believe that they are able to function on missions together because it is life or death. Why do you think it is that the author is repeating things several times? Or why he is adding in stories that don't further the plot?

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    2. I now believe that these things will eventually add up and make sense further along in the book.

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  15. The Red Badge of Courage so far to me is a controversial book. I find it controversial because Henry is joining the army just to try and make himself a man. I personally don't agree with this. Someone should not join the army to become a man, they should join because you have the want to protect the ones you care for. I think Henry cannot make it far into the army because of his scared nature. He runs from a fight and doesn't look back when he runs.

    While there are negatives of the book there are also some strong positives. One of the first positives that stuck out to me was how he portrayed Henry. I don't agree with Henry joining the army to make him a man. Also though Crane portrayed him as a scared young man. This made me feel hope for this book because it shows the truth in how the war would happen and what Henry would be feeling. Crane also uses very strong describing words that make me feel that I am truly in the book right beside Henry throughout his adventure in the war.

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    1. Do you think that he will become a man by the end of the book? What about running from the battles, will he stop that? I like how you said that he should've joined because he wants to protect the ones he cares for. Crane wrote in that in the Army, you'll become not a man but a member.

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  16. In Lord of the Flies, there are some events I don’t quite understand why they happened. For example, why is Jack so obsessed with killing the pig? The fire dies because he takes the choir boys away to help with hunting the pig. The end result is that they kill the pig but also a ship passed that could have possibly rescued them if the fire was still light. Why does the author make it Jack’s main goal to kill the pig? Ralph saw the ship and found out the fire was out. Being the leader and also wanting to get off the island, he obviously flipped out on Ralph. Since one chance for them to get off the island already passed, I wonder if more chances will appear and if they will actually get off the island in the end.

    In this novel, William Golding reflects on current events that are happening in and outside of the book. The book was published a few years after World War 2 which means William was probably writing it during the war. However, Ralph also mentions the war in the book. He says that his dad will come rescue them because he’s in the navy. A little later he says that probably won’t happen because World War 2 is occurring. Since the war was such a huge event I’m sure there will be many more references to it throughout the book. William could also be hinting at more than just the war going on, maybe he is trying to show how the war affected people, especially children. Already there have been many times that the kids give into their dark sides or are just plain rude to others. There are many different things the author is trying to tell the reader through the current events in his life.

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    1. I agree and this fighting is only the beginning I think. I think that there will be another chance because having a book and ending it where everyone dies or is still trapped would not be very interesting. I hope that there will be another way for them to be rescued. I think that since there was already a ship the author should create a different way for them to be rescued now.

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    2. Yes, I feel like the fighting will only get worse and not any better. Along with you, I also think that there needs to be another way for them to get off the island. Maybe an airplane could fly above it or something like that. However,they might focus more on the beast and staying alive from that.

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  17. I have thought a lot of different things in my reading of Light in August this week. The book to me feels like a small town setting, surrounded by fields. The reason why the town exists is because of the mill, and everyone knows everyone in the town. The book takes place in the mid 1900's, where racism is a big deal. The book has an intriguing story line to follow, with lots of unsuspecting events happening. The book starts out with giving the current details, followed by flashing back and following the character from a young age. This was very helpful in helping me figure out the first couple chapters. What seems to be the main character at the beginning of the book, is eventually lost, and transformed into the man she is looking for.

    In this book the story is centered around Joe Christmas. At the beginning of the book I think Joe is good man, until the book unveils his past. I blame most of what he did on his foster father and how he was raised. As harsh as his father was, I don't know how his father thought he would be a good man. I believe his childhood was what is to blame for the murder he committed. Because he had a ruptured childhood, I think that is also to blame for him using prostitutes, and raping the girl. I think Joe needs to be put in a rehab center to try and correct his mistakes. I did think Joe was innocent in the beginning, until I learned his past.

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    2. Yes, I think Joe murdered the women. I do not think Brown was the killer, because of Joe's abusive past, and how he came upon the scene. Joe was abused as a child. If I was abused as a child, I think I would be more destructive, I do not think it would stay the same.

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  18. The book Shane is a great book! I am really getting into it. i just finished reading about the stump of an old burr tree. it was such a big tree and so old and strong Joe could never do it himself. he couldn't even get the ax to go in more then half an inch. then Shane shows up and starts working on getting it out as payment for letting him stay.

    Whenever Joe sees Shane working on it he grabs an ax and helps. they do not speak at all, only brief moments of eye contact as they work around the huge stump. striking at the same times until it sounds like there is only one ax. when they are finished they pull it out and refuse to use horses. to me i believe the author was trying to show team work and how its easier to do thinks with others at your side. the context and description used in these chapters i will never forget.

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    2. as i said, teamwork

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  19. While continuing deeper in to the book "The Adventures of Tom Sawyer" I notice that is a different writing style than many books I have read. It is written with lots of dialog which is interesting do to the fact that they do not talk like we do today. It is sometimes confusing because of the mixing of dialog. I personally enjoy the dialog because it is very interesting the way they speak.
    I believe that with this Kind of Dialog it gives me a better picture in my head of what is going on in the story.

    Although I have not seen many books like it is does remind me of the silly things we do as kids such as invaluable things such as marbles are bargaining pieces. I enjoy this because it is simple but at the same time has depth, and is clever.

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  20. In the section of White Fang that I read for this week quite a bit happened. We learn a bit more about how the wolf pack works, and we hear how Henry ends up back at town. A bit later, the she-wolf gives birth to a litter of five wolves, four red and one grey. Eventually almost all the litter dies because they run low on food and their father wolf goes off and gets himself killed. White Fang is pretty different the books I normally read. White Fang tends to have very little dialogue, which is an interesting way to tell a story. Most of the story is told to us by the author telling us the thoughts of the wolves, especially the grey baby wolf, also known as White Fang. Throughout the reading I took part in for this week, White Fang learned a few lessons about life, one of the important ones being, EAT OR BE EATEN.(As shown in text)

    So, later on after White Fang learns eat or be eaten, he meets up with a native american group, and is lured in by the one weakness of all dogs, the belly rub. He then grows up with the native americans, and grows to be sort of rude, because of a bully known as Lip-lip. I find this specific part interesting because it shows how when a living being is put into a different situation, they tend to react with anger, confusion, and for the young, curiosity. One thing I can relate to White Fang is his inherent curiosity, I often wonder about things, and maybe investigate them in an odd way. White Fang shows this by whenever he encounters something he doesn’t know, he tries to figure it out. This happens with the “wall of light” and the fire incidents, where White Fangs curiosity gets the better of him. Eventually White Fang finds a chance and escapes the camp, just to realize he has grown soft and cannot survive alone in the wild. This is another comparable thing. I sometimes decide I don’t want extra help doing something, and then I stop taking the help, and then it just goes not too well, and I need help again.

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    1. I don't understand the first part of the book. What is the importance of Henry? Do you think that he is important or the beginning of the book is useless in that part? Does it just help with the plot and show the she-wolf as she is or not?

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    2. I think that we will see Henry again, but if we don't I'm sure that his part in the beginning was useful for establishing the characters of the wolves early on. I'm not sure how much it helped with the actual plot, but it definitely helped me see the she-wolf better.

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  21. In my readings of Shane, by Jack Schaefer, I have noticed many things. One, is how well the women are treated in this time period. Another is how much symbolism is used. For example, the weather was gloomy in Chapter 2 and no one could use the roads. However, one character, Jake Ledyard, walks down the road through the storm. To me, this symbolizes that bad tidings are due. Another example is when Shane and Joe get a tree trunk out of the ground. The story behind the tree trunk is that Joe has worked a long darn time trying to get that trunk out of the ground. Using Shane's help in Chapter 3, he is able to get the trunk out. I think that this means that there is a very strong bond growing between the two men. Also it might mean that a man can do anything he wants through sheer willpower.

    Other than symbolism, I also notice how the book, written in 1st person with the character Bob, doesn't have Bob say much. Since Bob is only a young boy, this may mean that he doesn't know what is exactly going on around him. However, the author may want the reader to experience what this life was actually like and how the children did what they were told, were respectful, and didn't chime in when they were needed out of respect for their elders. Overall this is a great book.

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    1. to go with your comment on first person, Bob is also seeing things threw a child's eyes, that could mean the the book is a flashback.

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    2. That makes a lot of sense. I never thought of that.

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  22. With the continuation of reading "Twenty Thousand Leagues Under the Sea" I have made connections from the text to my life. They think the giant beast of the sea could be an enormous narwhal or whale. I immediately made connections with this because I have a irrational fear of both of those creatures. In chapter 6, Ned Land spots the beast just as they were about to give up hope. During a many hour chase, the creature does not seem to tire at all. In fact, it begins to circle the Abe Lincoln as if to taunt the crew. This reminded me of the numerous times I have done similar acts to my brothers.

    As I have read, I have also noticed more characterization of the main characters. When Aronnex falls off of the Abe Lincoln he discovers that his servant, Conceil, had jumped into the vast body of water with his master. When Aronnex was too tired to swim any farther and told him to go on without him, Conciel states he would rather die than leave his master. This shows how loyal he is. They find Ned Land and are imprisoned in a cell on the submarine. Ned Land insists that the crew are cannibals and is ready to fight. He seems to act on impluse whereas Aronnex is patient and is able to keep his cool in the situation. Aronnex also ponders the various ways in which the submarine might function which shows he has a strong sense of curiosity.

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    1. I find it interesting that you related the way the creature circled the ship to the way you might taught your brothers. I also think that Aronnex is a curious man. Perhaps to curious. If not for his curiosity he wouldn't have embarked on this dangerous search.

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  23. Slaughterhouse - Five, by Kurt Vonnegut, is not really what the title suggests it to be. With a title such as this, one may think that it is about murder, like a murder mystery novel. However, when you begin to really get into the book you find that it is more a science fiction novel that includes most of WW2, time travel, and one really messed up guy. I have yet to find out why it is entitled this way because there has been not even the slightest hint as to what this title means. I feel like Vonnegut did this on purpose, he didn’t want to just give the whole book away with a title. His style of writing is also very interesting, he writes a very dry story and rarely uses adjectives. His sentences are very short and straightforward, although there a few moments that have a lot of dialogue and action. War is dreary except for the few, exciting moments of battle. Or life is boring, apart from those moments where everything is so surreal and new, such as when Billy time travels. Both of those examples relate right back to his writing, boring until a slight moment of action.

    Billy claims to experience being abducted by aliens, the Tralfamadorians. I believe this is not real, it is simply to show how greatly the war disrupted Billy's own sanity. The Tralfamadorians are simply his escape from his past, he lives in a world that was destroyed by war, a world he really can not understand any more. Vonnegut uses few symbols, but one that I think goes unnoticed is his reference back to blue and ivory feet. Like when Billy is writing a letter to the newspaper and forgets to turn the heater on, his feet turn blue and ivory or in WW2 when he describes a dead soldier's feet as blue and ivory. I think that this shows that his cold, corpse like feet somehow suggest how fragile it is between life and death, or between worldly and unworldly experiences. It's subtle I but believe that it is there.

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    1. I think that the book is finally getting into what the title of the book implies. I agree that his style is interesting due to his approach of the plot. I also think that it is real that he believes he was abducted. He could be suffering from PTSD. I think your theory about the blue and ivory feet is a good theory.

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  24. As I have been reading “The Count of Monte Cristo”, it has occurred to me just how many different types of characters that Alexandre Dumas has placed in this story. Two examples of very different characters has to be Edmond Dantés and Gérard de Villefort. Dantés, so far, has been portrayed as a very open and sincere character that doesn’t ever point out the bad side of people. Alexandre Dumas has made Dantés behave as an ordinary man so far in this story and hasn’t given the reader a ton of insight into why other characters in the book dislike Dantés. Villefort, as portrayed in the story, has some similarities to Dantés but is ultimately different. Villefort also has a sincere side to him but as soon as something comes about that could harm his image, like Dantés, he turns hostile and defensive. He eventually realizes his errors and how he could make himself a better person and this is a perfect example of a character growing throughout the book.

    The fact that Alexandre Dumas spent so much time creating so many different characters with ever more different personalities amazes me. I have never read a book that has so many characters this developed. Another thing that Dumas has done is not only successfully introduced so many characters, he has done it early in the story. Other books that I have read seem to not do a good job at keeping some characters separate in my head but Dumas has done a great job at this. This could be because of the different type of writing style that was used during this time period than is used today. “The Count of Monte Cristo” has definitely brought into light a new writing style for me. While this writing style is new, it doesn’t pose as a huge challenge due to the fact that our language today somewhat reflects the style used in the story.

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    1. I agree that Dumas places many characters in the beginning of the story and continues to use most of them thoroughly. I do feel that the character of Edmond Dantes worries about other people though. Do you agree? I do think your statement is correct in saying that he doesn't actually point out the bad in people. What amazes you more, the time it took for Dumas to create all of the personalities, or how Dumas wove them all together for his novel?

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    2. Dumas is really a great author in the fact that all of these different characters have personalities that intertwine with each other. I agree with you that Dantes seems to worry about other people and maybe that is a reason that some people don't like him. He seems to be a little nosy as well.

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  25. While reading Pride and Prejudice, I've come to realize some things that don't make complete sense to me. For one, I don't really understand how the girls are totally okay with their parents wanting to introduce them to a man just for his money. If I was one of them, I'd be a little mad at my parents for trying to force such a thing on me when I barely know the guy, but they seem eager and excited. The oldest two, Elizabeth and Jane, especially surprised me relating to this. I'd understand the younger ones dreaming about a boyfriend, but one would think that the older ones would be more mature about it. Perhaps they're as desperate as their parents are for them to marry, which also seems strange, since I feel like a lot of parents are usually a little protective of their children and their love lives, especially at younger ages.

    Secondly, I can't quite comprehend why Darcy, Mr. Bingley's friend, doesn't care to dance with anyone who isn't as wealthy as him. It's pretty harsh in a way. His perfect match could be right in front of him, yet he's too set on the money to care. Plus he was also kind of rude when talking to Mr. Bingley about not wanting to spend time with Elizabeth. Bingley doesn't seem share the same opinions as Darcy, so hopefully that works out for the best in the end with one of the sisters.

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    1. Why do you think Elizabeth and Jane are as desperate to marry as their parents? What do you think is strange about that? Why do you think parents care so much about their kids's love life? A lot of parents don't want their kids to have one at all. Do you think there's another, more realistic reason why Darcy won't dance with the man? I think there's almost a love triangle going on, and I have hope also, that everything works out for the sisters.

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    2. Why do you think Elizabeth and Jane are as desperate to marry as their parents? What do you think is strange about that? Why do you think parents care so much about their kids's love life? A lot of parents don't want their kids to have one at all. Do you think there's another, more realistic reason why Darcy won't dance with the man? I think there's almost a love triangle going on, and I have hope also, that everything works out for the sisters.

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    3. To me, I think Elizabeth and Jane are as desperate to marry as their parents are for them to because that's what society tells them they should do right away. Same with their parents, that's all they know and are used to. It seems strange coming from my point of view because in this day and age, we're not urged to marry from the start like they seem to be. It's difficult to imagine my parents acting that way to me.
      Also, on the topic of Darcy, I feel like he's simply just arrogant and doesn't want to dance with anyone of less fortune than him. Sad, but truly I believe that's why he refused.

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    4. To me, I think Elizabeth and Jane are as desperate to marry as their parents are for them to because that's what society tells them they should do right away. Same with their parents, that's all they know and are used to. It seems strange coming from my point of view because in this day and age, we're not urged to marry from the start like they seem to be. It's difficult to imagine my parents acting that way to me.
      Also, on the topic of Darcy, I feel like he's simply just arrogant and doesn't want to dance with anyone of less fortune than him. Sad, but truly I believe that's why he refused.

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  26. In reading the novel, The Scarlet Letter many things are confusing and frustrating. To begin with, Hester is treated with uttermost disrespect. Even though she had committed adultery, her husband had sent her to America and told her that he would follow her but then didn’t. Then, when she was tired of waiting she met someone else and got pregnant. I don’t understand why she was treated so harshly when he wasn’t around and was thought of to be dead. Then when her husband comes back he is in disguise and Hester is the only one to recognize him and he wanted to keep it that way. Once he heard what she was being punished for, he understood and knew that she was beautiful and that he couldn’t keep her happy. He understands why she did it but still wants revenge on her and the man she had a child with but it was his fault in the beginning that it happened.
    There is actually a lot of symbolism portrayed in the beginning of the novel. The main symbol would be the red ‘A’ used for shame that Hester has to wear but eventually she wears it as a powerful way to identify herself. Even her daughter doesn’t recognize her without it. Pearl doesn’t see her mother as a bad person. She thinks the letter is unimportant and I think that it shows how meaningless the communities judgement against her is. Another example of symbolism would be Pearl. I think she’s a good example because she’s a constant reminder of what Hester did that was bad in the towns eyes. But I don’t think she’s only a bad reminder; Pearl is exactly like her mother, reminding Hester that that same attitude has gotten her where she was. When Hester is ready to give up Pearl reminds her why she doesn’t.

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    1. I do agree that some things are frustrating and sort of confusing. Do you think that maybe as the book goes on that Hester's husband will forgive her?

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    2. I think that he already had forgiven her he just wanted to know who her lover was. I believe that even though she has committed adultery he still wants her back in a way.

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  27. Upon reading "20,000 Leagues Under the Sea,¨ I as the reader have been both delighted, and puzzled. This story thus far has a sense of darkness around it. The scenes depicted are mainly aboard a boat named, Abe Lincoln. As I read I like to entertain the idea that I am in the setting with the characters. I must say I have no desire to ever take to the open seas like Professor Aronnax, even for the sake of science. Professor Aronnax takes his trusted servant Conceil with him on this journey in search of the great creature. I find Conceil characterization quite peculiar. He is one hundred percent submissive to Aronnaxes will. Behaving much like that of an adoring child.

    Despite the few things in this story that create a sense of uneasiness there is an equal amount of wonder instilled in the reader. There is this large powerful create, described as possibly a large narwhal or whale. Yet it has never been seen enough to know the true nature. You find yourself pondering,
    "Is it just an animal or could it truly by something more mythical?"Then the with a twist of the plot Aronnax is thrown over board and after nearly drowning discovers that it is not an animal at all, more like some kind of submarine. Its quite enthralling.

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  28. Upon reading "20,000 Leagues Under the Sea,¨ I as the reader have been both delighted, and puzzled. This story thus far has a sense of darkness around it. The scenes depicted are mainly aboard a boat named, Abe Lincoln. As I read I like to entertain the idea that I am in the setting with the characters. I must say I have no desire to ever take to the open seas like Professor Aronnax, even for the sake of science. Professor Aronnax takes his trusted servant Conceil with him on this journey in search of the great creature. I find Conceil characterization quite peculiar. He is one hundred percent submissive to Aronnaxes will. Behaving much like that of an adoring child.

    Despite the few things in this story that create a sense of uneasiness there is an equal amount of wonder instilled in the reader. There is this large powerful create, described as possibly a large narwhal or whale. Yet it has never been seen enough to know the true nature. You find yourself pondering,
    "Is it just an animal or could it truly by something more mythical?"Then the with a twist of the plot Aronnax is thrown over board and after nearly drowning discovers that it is not an animal at all, more like some kind of submarine. Its quite enthralling.

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  29. The novel Treasure Island is about pirates, rum, and booty. These topics are interesting to me because they are told by a young boy who is coming of age throughout the novel. The fact that the narrator is a young boy recounting his adventures can really change the tone of the novel. This is because pirates are typically seen as dark and brooding figures. However, the youth's take on it can make it more light hearted and happy. The author emphasizes that the narrator is a child who is fearful of these pirates by making him cry for his mom at the end of chapter III.

    I believe that the author is making the point of his childishness on purpose. It is my prediction that he is going to make it apparent later in the novel that the main character, Jim, has matured over the course of the story. My reasoning behind this assumption is that the author went out of his way to emphasize Jim's youth early on. Of course it would be difficult for a child to remain oblivious to the wonders of maturity when he is sailing the high seas with swashbuckling mateys while searching for treasure conveniently marked with an "X"

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  30. The novel Treasure Island is about pirates, rum, and booty. These topics are interesting to me because they are told by a young boy who is coming of age throughout the novel. The fact that the narrator is a young boy recounting his adventures can really change the tone of the novel. This is because pirates are typically seen as dark and brooding figures. However, the youth's take on it can make it more light hearted and happy. The author emphasizes that the narrator is a child who is fearful of these pirates by making him cry for his mom at the end of chapter III.

    I believe that the author is making the point of his childishness on purpose. It is my prediction that he is going to make it apparent later in the novel that the main character, Jim, has matured over the course of the story. My reasoning behind this assumption is that the author went out of his way to emphasize Jim's youth early on. Of course it would be difficult for a child to remain oblivious to the wonders of maturity when he is sailing the high seas with swashbuckling mateys while searching for treasure conveniently marked with an "X"

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    1. I like your prediction about Jim maturing over time in the story. Do you think that this book is more about Jim growing up rather than pirates?

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    2. I like your prediction about Jim maturing over time in the story. Do you think that this book is more about Jim growing up rather than pirates?

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    3. I think it's about Jim growing up alongside pirates. They all learn from each other.

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  31. After reading "Treasure Island" by Robert Louis Stevenson, the thing that has caught my eye the most is the characterization. This book does a great job at giving in depth detail on each and every character described. The doctor is described as a strong authority figure. He stands up to bill when he wanted to fight, he takes charge in bad situations, and he is good at getting people to do what he wants them too. Bill was the sailor who is staying at Jim's family inn and was the other authority figure. He was easily characterized this way because everyone he talked to was scared of him and agreed to what he said. He stopped paying for his room showing charge and he could get Jim to do anything for him. He also shows authority by telling people to call him "captain".

    Characterization was just one of the big things I noticed in this book. The character development caught my attention as well. The biggest example of this is in the character Jim. Jim is the main character of the book and he changes a lot as the story goes on. He starts out as the scared, quiet sin of an inn-owner, but later changes through the story. He becomes more and more courageous, and he seems to grow up. Treasure island could be labeled as a coming of age story for Jim.

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  32. In the book White Fang by Jack London, London has a weird way of describing things through the eyes of the pup. There is a “wall of light” is the saying that stands out the most. He also talks about how the pup learns “hurt” and “fear”. He learns hurt when he tries to escape from the den and his mother pushes her paw on him so he doesn’t leave. He also learns fear here as well because there is a reason that his mother does not want him to leave. There must be something wrong with the world out there. I find it interesting that London decides to write this in the eyes of the pup. I find it cool that he did because it makes you go into the main character's eyes and see things their way. I wouldn’t have thought about how the pup had learned fear or hurt if London didn’t write it like he did. The setting reminds me of an Iowan winter. It’s harsh and hard to find food. Many times you don’t see animals like rabbits and birds out, which is the main food source for wolves. This famine causes problems because the dad, One-Eye, cannot find enough food for the pups and 4 of the 5 die.

    This reading makes me think of my own life. The wolf pup is curious and wants to learn more about the world, which I do as well. The setting also reminds me of the Iowa weather. It’s cold and there was snow on the ground but the harsh winter is turning to spring. This book makes a connection with The Odyssey, which we are currently reading in class. At a point White Fang, the pup, is kept or held by the Native Americans, Odysseus is held as prisoner as well. I don’t understand why the first part of the book was there and what the connection could possibly be? Only one person survived from the sled ride and I feel like he has an importance in the book otherwise he would’ve been killed along with the dogs and his friend.

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    3. Do you think reading through the eyes of the pup is beneficial? Or does it hinder the story line? Personally I think it can get strenuous at times.

      I enjoy how the book can be related to an Iowa winter. It gives us a unique connection to the book.

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    4. I think it helps a little bit. You understand what he is thinking and why but it does get hard at times. I don't like it when it starts flip flopping back and forth, between the pups view and the view of the book.

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  33. After reading "Treasure Island" by Robert Louis Stevenson, the thing that has caught my eye the most is the characterization. This book does a great job at giving in depth detail on each and every character described. The doctor is described as a strong authority figure. He stands up to bill when he wanted to fight, he takes charge in bad situations, and he is good at getting people to do what he wants them too. Bill was the sailor who is staying at Jim's family inn and was the other authority figure. He was easily characterized this way because everyone he talked to was scared of him and agreed to what he said. He stopped paying for his room showing charge and he could get Jim to do anything for him. He also shows authority by telling people to call him "captain".

    Characterization was just one of the big things I noticed in this book. The character development caught my attention as well. The biggest example of this is in the character Jim. Jim is the main character of the book and he changes a lot as the story goes on. He starts out as the scared, quiet sin of an inn-owner, but later changes through the story. He becomes more and more courageous, and he seems to grow up. Treasure island could be labeled as a coming of age story for Jim.

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    2. I think that it is a result of both. His adventure makes him grow, making him more experienced and mature, but he also naturally matures as he gets older.

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    3. I think that it is a result of both. His adventure makes him grow, making him more experienced and mature, but he also naturally matures as he gets older.

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  34. George Orwell's Animal Farm is filled with references to the real world and the way things are run in governments around the world. Already in chapters one through five there has been uprisings, debates, war, propaganda, greed, lies, and subliminal messages. This book does an excellent job of showing how governments can use propaganda to make you believe something. It also does an excellent job of outlining both sides of the argument in a debate. The animals are unknowingly cycling through the different forms of government. They are currently under Napoleon's communist government because Napoleon hated Snowball's debates.

    A specific example of the use of propaganda is when the neighboring farm owners explain to their animals that without the help of the humans, life would be very difficult and the animals would suffer. This reminds me of World War Two propaganda made by Germany, because they were basically a communist force trying to convince the people that everything about the Jewish are bad for the country. Germany was very good at using propaganda to convince its population. This also reminds me of when Napoleon the pig claims Snowball's idea for a windmill as his own original idea even though it wasn't. He used propaganda and lies to convince the farm animals. The underlying point here is that this book is mostly about politics and the different forms of government.

    I think it is very cool to see how quickly things can change in government, and this book is doing a great job at showing every aspect of these changes.

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    1. I definitely agree with you that this book does a great job of showing how easily governments can change. Why do you think it is so easy to show this? Do you think the farm will be flipped upside down again?

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    2. I think it is easy to show because George Orwell used real life situations in his book. I think he used examples from history. I think the farm could easily be flipped again because it is a communism, and many communist governments have been overthrown or changed.

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  35. While reading “The Call of the Wild” this week, not much has happened. The whole first section of the book is dedicated to Buck learning how to survive in a world totally different from what he is used to. He has been beaten and forced to work, which has never happened to him before in his life. The author over-emphasizes how smart Buck is through examples of what Buck is learning on his own. These include Buck discovering where to sleep so as not to freeze to death, his newfound ability to steal food when no one is looking, and also how quickly he has learned pack dynamics with the other dogs. Another way the author stresses Buck’s intelligence is by putting in comments from the two men who are now in possession of Buck saying things about how quick he learns and how he fits in with the other dogs. Buck learning to fit in in the wild with the other dogs kind of reminds me of everyone’s first day of highschool. No one is exactly sure where to go or what to do, so they just go with the flow and try to figure it out as quickly as possible.

    Another thing I noticed while reading the novel in the reader-response lens is that Buck’s experiences in “The Call of the Wild” remind me of is Lenny and George in “Of Mice and Men”. Lenny and George were trying their best to make it on their own in the real world, similarly to Buck. No one was really helping them out and they had to adapt to their situation in order to survive. In both cases, it is a situation where you do what must be done to survive. One thing I don’t quite understand in the novel is why the author makes such a big deal about the bad relationship between Buck and another dog on the team, Spitz. The two dogs are constantly at each others throats, literally, and the men are genuinely concerned for Buck’s safety. Other than making the story more interesting, as it is otherwise a little boring while they are traveling through the frozen tundra, there isn’t a whole lot of point in including this detail. I think the author might have included this to help stress that Buck could be killed at any moment in the wild, but I’m not sure.

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    1. The main thing I was thinking about was how anyone could do anything like that to a dog that never tried to hurt them. Why do you think the gardener's helper sold Buck in the first place?

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  36. Slaughterhouse Five, by Kurt Vonnegut, has a very interesting plot. The beginning of the book starts with a veteran of World War II, Billy Pilgrim, trying to write books about the war. He leaves to meet with an old war buddy to restore memories from the war. Billie can travel through any time in his life, past, present, or future. While Billy’s books recalls events from the war, it talks about him being in the war and going back into the time before war and seeing the future. The approach Vonnegut used for the plot was interesting. Other authors use the approach of time travel but I have not yet seen it executed in such way. I feel like this way is more intriguing due to the rest of the plot yet it can be confusing to some readers.
    Vonnegut also used many interesting details that brought visual details into thoughts of readers. Billie, throughout his “time travel” recalls of being help captive on a flying saucer by aliens, or Tralfamadorians. This aspect of the novel is very descriptive. “The saucer was one hundred feet in diameter, with portholes around its rims. The light from the portholes was a pulsing purple.” (Chapter 4, Pages 75-76) This interests me as a reader because you can imagine the saucer descending from the sky. Other aspects of the novel were also descriptive, such as when the war was occurring. Parts of the novel I do not understand is the timing of the “time travel”. The time travel occurs at random moments in the novel and the placement of some confuses me.

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    1. I don't think that the book starts out as Billy Pilgrim, I believe that it is a failed autobiography. ( I found the first chapter confusing as well, so Sparknotes helped sort it out for me.) In the rest of the book, the plot is based around Billy, but in the first chapter it is Vonnegut writing about himself and how he decided to write this book after he failed writing about him and his war buddy in Dresden. If you ask me Chapter One should be titled more as Preface than a chapter. I agree that the placement of some these time travels is very confusing, but some how it always ends back in a World War 2 setting, do you think this on purpose?

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    2. I understand your thinking about the failed autobiography. The first chapter compared to the rest of the book is very confusing. I think it is on purpose so it could bring more to the plot of the novel.

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  37. So far in "Journey to the Center of the Earth" not much has happened. Harry and Hardwigg meet and climb the mountain with Hans. Hans is not like Harry and Hardwigg. He is more on the manly side compared to the two. The three climb the mountain and find an entrance to an underground labyrinth where the entrance to the center of the Earth is suppose to be. They have to wait for the sun to show them the hole and because of that they almost died of dehydration. That is probably the most exciting thing that has happened in the book so far. They survive thanks to Hans finding water. However in the process Hans got burnt by the boiling hot water he found.

    This book is personally really bland. There is no real action that has happened yet. The way that Harry and Hardwigg talk to each other also seems strange to me. I understand that the two and really intelligent, but the way they talk like they are arguing with each other all time can be confusing. Then there is some of the personality traits that I find annoying about Harry and Hardwigg. Harry is on the soft side with his uncle, he can never be strict or talk back even though he thinks or knows he is right. Then for Hardwigg, he is just too cocky. He always thinks he is right and it must go his way.

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    1. I agree that the book is terribly bland, but you were the one to choose it. Why did you choose this book? How is the way Harry and Hardwigg talk confusing? They are both arrogant and want to be the one who is correct. This causes conflict because neither wants to admit when they are wrong. Also, what was the point of mentioning their intelligence if the confusing part was their arguing? I think you should elaborate on that. Are there any other noteworthy personality traits of the group? Did anything jump out at you?

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    2. I chose this book because I have have always had an interest in Reading this book. I just didn't know that the book would be so bland. Also the confusing part or more like a bit unnatural to me personally is how they talk so perfectly. They never really talk like most people who have grammar mistakes and other mistakes in the way they talk. Also the reason I added there intelligence is that at certain times they start saying word that I do not know the meaning to. I don't like the fact that they go into such complex argument where the reader doesn't understand what they are talking about. Lastly nothing really stood out to me so far in the book.

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  38. White Fang is certainly a unique book. A large portion of the book is described through the young wolf's perspective. By reading through the pup's eyes, you are able to understand the character better. You begin to fully comprehend the characters motives and fears. However, at this point in the book, the pup does not have any clear motives other than to survive. As the pup begins to grow, it starts understanding the world for what it is. It is not such an innocent world, there is danger everywhere. The pups father, one eye, died trying to find food for his pups.

    White Fang is slowly learning the lessons of the wild. He learns you must face your fears. But White Fang also learns sometimes it is better to stay put and stay safe. These lessons can be directly apply to our lives. Making the judgement call on how to handle situations is something White Fang will be forced to do. Will he become ruthless because of his fathers death? Or live a peaceful life in the woods? As the book progresses, we will be sure to find out.

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    1. I like how you are thinking about how White Fang will act in the future, I think he will become ruthless, because of his father. I think reading through the pup's perspective puts quite an interesting twist on it, but sometimes confuses me. Do you think there is a better way to tell the story?

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    2. It seems as though he will become cruel but I doubt he will actually turn out that way. I believe his mother is raising him right. We will have to wait and see.

      When it comes to the perspective of the story, I think reading the book through White Fang's eyes is the best way to go. At times the story sounds a little strange because it is coming from a wolf. However, it is a different twist and I probably wouldn't change it.

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  39. While reading the novel, Kidnapped, David has done a lot of things but hasn’t necessarily had goals to accomplish. For example he was set on a ship to an unknown destination. This far in the book, David the main character has not been kidnapped. He doesn’t want to return home but he wasn't kidnapped.

    There has been a lot of characterization between the main characters as I continue to read the novel. David is caring, and a very thoughtful man, David has a strong faith and isn't looking to fight unless he gets called to. Alan is the complete opposite because he is a rebel and looks for trouble.

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    1. Looks like we had the same exact view. But I ended up writing my blogs before I finished our scheduled reading and as I finished I found that he actually does have a motive. He wants to go back to his uncle and gain respect and control. This means that when he forced on the boat, he actually was kidnapped.

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    3. I get it now, thanks for the clarification.

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    4. No problem, but now knowing this, would this change any of your views on the book? I think it makes much more sense with why David is just following Alan and fulfilling all of his demands since Alan is leading back to his uncle.

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  40. Continuing on with The Scarlet Letter by Nathaniel Hawthorne I have noticed that he writes in symbols and not with straightforward statements. One symbol that he uses is the red “A” that Hester is made to wear on all of her clothes. As the book goes on she really embraces the “A” even though it is used to identify her as committing adultery. She committed this crime with Reverend Dimmesdale, and he got her pregnant. Hester is surrounded by strict rules of the Puritan society. Although Hester is under those rules, I think that underneath all that there is a story of crime and passion.
    I think that Reverend Dimmesdale destroyed the bond between himself and his position as a minister and as a member of society, because of what he had done. What he had done has lead him to almost become insane. I think this was because he believes that it wasn’t all Hester’s fault. I think his conscience is letting him believe this and feel guilty about what he did. If he had stood up for Hester, he wouldn’t feel like a terrible person. Hester’s life could’ve been very different and her child, Pearl, wouldn’t have to grow up and have everyone look at her like she is a disgrace.

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    1. I agree with what you said about if Reverend Dimmesdale stood up Pearl wouldn't be known as a result of sin.

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    2. Pearl could live a very normal life if he did stand up to what he did. Maybe later on he will, we will just have to wait and see.

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  41. To continue on A Farewell to Arms by Ernest Hemingway the main character Lieutenant Henry still likes Catherine Barkley but not as much. On page 30 Catherine asks "You did say you loved me, didn't you?" in which Lt. Henry replies, "Yes," I lied. "I love you." I had not said it before. A lot of war talk and talk of Catherine Barkley.
    Ernest Hemingway still writes in first person in the view of Lt Henry. Hemingway writes in a way that can be confusing,not knowing who is talking when someone speaks. Detail is very well described and not so much as the relationships between people.

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    1. Can you find a short passage where the dialogue is confusing? (Just to give a better idea of why it's confusing). Also, what do you think might happen between Henry and Catherine later, given what's happened between them so far?

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  42. To continue on A Farewell to Arms by Ernest Hemingway the main character Lieutenant Henry still likes Catherine Barkley but not as much. On page 30 Catherine asks "You did say you loved me, didn't you?" in which Lt. Henry replies, "Yes," I lied. "I love you." I had not said it before. A lot of war talk and talk of Catherine Barkley.
    Ernest Hemingway still writes in first person in the view of Lt Henry. Hemingway writes in a way that can be confusing,not knowing who is talking when someone speaks. Detail is very well described and not so much as the relationships between people.

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  43. A Farewell to Arms takes an interesting approach to a war setting. So far, unlike most war novels, the focus is on the soldiers themselves and their social interactions, rather than the battles. It's also more slowly paced, rather than being action-based. I'm hoping it will start to pick up speed, since the beginning seems to be a little slow.
    When you begin reading the book, you're dropped into the perspective of Henry, who, in the first chapter, describes every detail of his surroundings. This gives a really clear picture of the setting...but not of the main character himself. You don't really know much about his personal life or anything interesting about him, which makes his perspective a little less valuable or a little slow to the reader at times.

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  45. Although I am not very far into “The Pearl” it is quite a short book. So far, I have noticed many things. One specific that has popped out to me is how separate things are. The rich and the poor seem to be of two different species, almost as they do not speak of the same language. When the main character, Kino, takes his son the the doctor, he does not get treated because he cannot pay. This seemed to be a whole neighborhood affair when Coyotito was stung. When the servant answered the door, author John Steinbeck made it seem as though he was of the same “kind” as Kino and his wife. This is a huge issue, as the amount of money or his race being different could’ve helped his son a lot faster.
    This brings to mind one instance of discrimination in today’s world. When researching my problem and solution project, I chose world thirst. As one might know, problems in Flint, Michigan were arising not too long ago. As the water was contaminated, people were stuck. They could not do anything. The government is trying to fix this issue. The majority of Flint is black, as the majority of the government is white. Perhaps if that were different, and everyone was they same (or racism didn’t exist), then this problem might be smaller and easier to solve.

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  46. Through the reading of The Count of Monte Cristo, the characters Edmond Dantes and Gerard de Villefort contrast to each other greatly. Edmond Dantes is portrayed as a great man. However, he continues to be a flat character with little to no information to let the reader expand their knowledge about him. In contrast Alexandre Dumas has created Villefort as more of a dynamic character by letting the reader in on more of his emotions. Throughout the novel so far, I have seen Villefort “blossom” almost as a character more than Dantes. As a reader, I have seen his kind side towards his fiance and I have also seen his more cold side when it comes to Dantes. Villefort wants what he wants and isn’t afraid to get it. That is very different than the character of Dantes so far.

    I personally have gotten confused about the characters more than once in my readings of The Count of Monte Cristo. I believe that the author has done a nice job of separating characters, but I’ve read books who have kept their characters much farther apart and easier to identify. Alexandre Dumas introduces many characters in the very beginning of his book and although this is partially confusing to me sometimes, it is different than any other novel I have read. Often it takes a while to be given more characters that truly add to the storyline, but in The Counte of Monte Cristo the new characters are introduced with ease. The way the novel is written is a tad different than the style of books today. That has much to do with slangs we now use and things like that. However, I do not find the novel difficult to understand because the writing style is similar enough to what more books are now that it isn’t too hard. Dumas’s vivid writing style is very intriguing and good to read.

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    1. Alexandre Dumas has definitely brought a lot of characters to the table right away in the story. As with you, it has been challenging at times to keep the different characters separate in my head as well. I also agree that Dantes doesn't seem to have grown as much through the story as I thought he would. Do you think this is something that we will read about in the future or is this the character that we will be stick with?

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  47. When I was reading The Call of the Wild it made me sad that there would be anyone who would sell a dog to someone who would torture it just for money. I don't think that the gardener was thinking about Buck when he sold him. Buck liked living where he was and was never beaten like after he was sold. I know he had never been hit with a club before because when he was for the first time he didn't understand what had happened. How could anyone treat a dog like that? Before Buck was taken I don't think he would have ever hurt anyone. If they would have been nice to Buck as soon as they bought him he might not want to hurt anyone. If they were nice maybe he would have just done what they wanted without a fight.

    Now, because of they way Buck was being treated, he might not trust any people any more. He might be scared that they will beat him or starve him. If I were Buck I would wish that the humans would just bring me back home where I was cared for. Any chance I got I would try to run away. I wonder how may dogs this has happened to. Dogs are living things too. They deserve to be treated well unless they prove they will be dangerous.

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  48. There are two sides to every story and while I don't think taking True Son from his Indian family was right, you get to see a white man's perspective.

    When I read this story I am so often reminded of when people say I'm so grey. I'm not black or white, I am aware of both sides of the coin. This story is based on real life experiences when two people argue. You can't just raise your voices in an argument and keep preaching your right, you have to listen to what others have to say.

    In every story and real life there's a good guy and a bad guy. What I've learned in every fairy tale and throughout history is that people aren't evil to be evil, they thinking they're right. Whether the Whites are wrong or not is something that has gone down in history, but I think that this story will favor True Son and his real, Indian family who raised him.

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    1. I strongly disagree that every story has a clear cut good and bad guy. Life is not a Disney movie. Lines between good and evil are VERY blurred in real life and almost non-existent. I find this true in "The Light in the Forest" but, looking at the story the way you do, who do you think the good guys are and the bad guys are?

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    2. I'd say children are the so-called "good-guys". They didn't do anything wrong and yet True son (who is an example - one of many) was abducted from his home of white people, taken to an Indian Reservation where he was forced to become an Indian and then when he truly became one, adults (which, in my view are the "bad-guys") kidnapped him and forced him into a new society different from what he had come to know as his home. Adults do what they think is best and as much as I wish one side was right and wrong, children are the only real innocence in the world.

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    3. Stepping away from the good guy versus bad guy outlook, I feel that "The Light in the Forest" has an antagonistic force more than an antagonist. True Son, being the main character, has to fight an antagonistic force which would be his multiple loyalties. His split loyalties lead True Son to the climax of the story when he has to decide between his Indian family and his English family. What do you believe to be the antagonistic force of this book?

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  49. After I read through the first few chapters of Bram Stokers book Dracula, it made me confused. I don't truly understand why Abraham (the main character) Would go to Dracula's castle in the first place. I also don't understand why he wouldn't leave as soon as he started hearing rumors and witnessed weird things.

    Something that is hard for me to in this book to understand is the language. There so far has been a lot of phrases in German, and using old words is a common occurence. So when I hear these words, I usually don't understand what they are trying to say. It's kinda like when we studied Romeo and Juliet in 9th grade. The language back at that time seemed normal to them, but for us it was dreadful to read it, just like how it would be for them if we sent our novels back with our new slangs, and langauges

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